First Impressions Matter - How to Deliver a Compelling Opening

Can you imagine a John Grisham novel beginning with, "Hi, my name is John Grisham. The name of this book is The Firm"? Or worse, how about an episode of the West Wing starting with Martin Sheen saying, "Hi, I am Martin Sheen. Today's episode is about…"

Books and television shows don't start like this for good reason. Writers know that audiences are already thinking about personal items, and as writers, they are competing for mind-share against everyday life. Presentations are no different than books or television shows. Presenters need to make their presentations stand out right away. To do so, a presenter must have a compelling opening.

To illustrate the importance of an effective opening in business presentations, let's take a look at a presentation from the viewpoint of some typical audience members - people from a management team who are participating in a quarterly update.

John and his wife are sharing the car today. His mind is consumed as he tries to figure out how he is going to get out of work early enough to pick up his daughter and wife by 5:15.

Hilary is thinking about the budgets, due tomorrow. She's not yet sure how she is going to divide all resources between all divisions.

Bill is on a mental vacation. He leaves for Hawaii in the morning.

What is the challenge here? Your audience is physically present, but their minds are not. As a presenter, you must quickly get your audience mentally in the room if you expect to get results. Unfortunately, many presenters fail to do so. Most presenters begin with statements like:

  • Thanks for being here. My topic is the quarterly update.

  • Hi, my name is Joe Smith and I am with the ACME Corporation. We specialize in Wi-Fi security.

  • Thank you. It is a pleasure to be here to talk with you about a career in the biotech industry.

Starting with a lifeless opening like these will likely keep your audience mulling over their transportation, budget or vacation issues while you launch into a presentation that could be helpful for your audience - if only they'd listen.

Can you recover from a weak opening? Perhaps, but the tone has been set. So how can you get your presentation started on the right foot? We'll address three alternatives guaranteed to jumpstart any presentation.

Ask a Question

Questions instantly engage an audience and turn a passive presentation into an active experience. They shift the audience's mind from their mental preoccupations and get them refocused on the questions at hand.

What types of questions should you ask to grab your audience?

  • For the quarterly update presentation: What words come to mind when you think about our last quarter?

  • For a presentation on Wi-Fi security: How would you feel if you knew your competitors were reading your e-mails?

  • For a presentation to students interested in a career in the biotech industry: What draws you to a career in biotechnology?

Questions like these make the audience feel like they are part of the presentation, not just suffering through it because they are required to attend.

Introduce a Startling and Vivid Statistic

A well placed statistic can create meaning and context for a topic. It can also shed new light on a familiar topic.

Examples of statistics as openers:

  • For the quarterly update presentation: We improved profitability by 20% over last quarter.

  • For a presentation on Wi-Fi security: As many as four out of 10 of your emails may not be reaching their intended destinations.

  • For a presentation to students interested in a career in the biotech industry: Average real wages in the biotech industry nearly doubled in the last 10 years to $70,000.

By providing simple compelling statistics, your will awake your audience, and create an opportunity for your presentation to be absorbed.

Bottom Line It

Audiences are inundated with data. The power of directness can gain your audience's attention quickly. Additionally, directness ensures that your message is delivered clearly and succinctly.

Below are some bottom-lines that could be delivered:

  • For the quarterly update presentation: Bottom line is we have hit our target numbers for the 3rd quarter.

  • For a presentation on Wi-Fi security: Wi-Fi equals exposure. Implementing solutions is not an option.

  • For a presentation to students interested in a career in the biotech industry: Careers in biotechnology are booming.

Bottom line your message and watch your audience become engaged.

Next time you have the opportunity to present, challenge yourself to sound more like the first line of a book or television show by starting your presentation with anything but, "Hi, my name is..." Peak their interest with a compelling first line. Then, they will want to know your name.


Diane West is president of 2Connect, a San-Diego based company specializing in presentation training and coaching. She can be reached at dwest@twoconnect.net or 858-638-7544.

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